P4


GOOD SHOTS
SCENE/SHOT
TCI
TCO
NOTES
fight sequence
00:00:44:01
 00:00:48:25
both characters shown at balanced level suggesting equal power.
Drone Conversation
00:01:02:04
00:01:07:27
Shows power in the shot
Character on floor
00:00:04:23
00:00:05:16
Camera looks down on character suggesting he has no power.
Gun malfunction
00:00:40:22
00:00:43:21
Character is level in the shot and camera is steady.
BAD SHOTS
to be re-shot
SCENE/SHOT
TCI
TCO
NOTES
Rock Throw/MVI_1321
1:11
1:14
 It is abrupt and doesn't have much place in the scene. There isn’t much movement with the camera  
Arm Reveal/MVI_1329
0:22
0:24
Doesn’t have anything in it and feels random so it needs a visual effect to give it something
Threating drone noise scene/MVI_1365
1:21
1:25
It needs to be reshot because there isn’t as much show of acting skills.
Pill taking/MVI_2538
1:26
1:38
The environment doesn't work with the previous scene and the audio is unusable



Logging rushes

MVI_1321
00.01..11
00.01.14
Needs to be replaced with more relevant shot.

MVI_1329




MVI_1365




MVI_2538
00.00.22




00.01.21




00.01.26
00.00.24




00.01.25




00.01.38
Needs to be either re - shot or re - done with space for visual effect.


Needs to be re - shot due to poor acting and concentration.


Needs to be re - shot with new environment














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